Score: 10

"you know what..."

submission: My New Grounds

date: December 17, 2007

that was great...i liked it better than those damn commercials, but thats just cause its newgrounds....man i feel like making one now too....but i dont have the resources....great stuff though

Score: 7

"felt like an ad..."

submission: Santa vs Jack

date: December 6, 2007

you showed purchasable costumes from a sponsor...looks like....and you had the link to that site in alot of places....

now for the game itself....shoulda gone with a "keep going till you die" sorta thing....time limits always make me unhappy.....nice art, played at a good speed, pretty simple

Score: 3

"well, ill try and be constructive"

submission: 777 - Part 6

date: November 9, 2007

the whole thing was pretty good in the art...0 shading though, no sense of atmosphere in the lighting department

it lacked an entire feel of art, it felt like pixels because everything was vector except for the animations, and since all you did was tween them, it made the vector lifelessness....
almost entirely 2D, i felt there was no third dimension.....

also the story wasnt really that great...you had like no suspense..she gets captured for one day....doesnt get harmed at all, just captured...and escapes when a guy can just enter the top secret base, and gave her the key to a giant stash of weapons...in her cell....

and the lack of voice acting also made it much less involving.....

Score: 8

"creepy...."

submission: Dumbledore is Gay

date: November 5, 2007

i liked how snape was an emo, that was good, very funny

Score: 9

"it was great, yes.."

submission: Waterlollies

date: November 5, 2007

but not your best...artistically, i felt it was different... a lil better, but i still liked little foot better.

this had a hell of a lot of build up....everyone waiting for this great thing, but it just felt sorta...empty, dunno how to say it.... the speed is bitey's thing, and i figured "oh $#!! !! bitey battles the alpha bigfoot" but, it turned out no, not so much

the art, great
the music, synced and great
the story is the only thing that needs improvement. it was hard to describe, so dont take my review seriously...cause i dont think i made any points....

Great though...definately worth mine and anyone elses time

Score: 1

"unoriginal"

submission: Stamper </3

date: September 15, 2007

its one thing to have a flash inspire you, but its another thing to take the same exact idea, and just redo it with different characters. if this was original, it would have been pretty funny, but no, its not...

Score: 2

"it didnt show anything"

submission: FbF advanced tutorial

date: August 20, 2007

you pretty much said "make a stick, flesh it and add color" thats not showing technique, a process, pretty much anything that would be very helpful. or at least you shouldnt have called it advanced

Score: 8

"awesome game, not much replay value"

submission: Newgrounds Rumble

date: August 8, 2007

after you unlock everything, and you ve played for a while it gets very boring, i dont know how to fix this (more unlockable characters?) but ya, great game the first time around but once you beat it....

Score: 4

"not bad for a first"

submission: FBF (My First flash EVER)

date: August 4, 2007

actually, not bad for any flash, you need to work on your actual drawings, and you need to keep the lines thickness consistent. when the stuff actually started taking on a form was when it was obvious that it was noob, but thw line was good

Score: 7

"not bad"

submission: A Kitty Krew Beatdown

date: July 22, 2007

it had good fbf, i have little bad things to say abuot this, ok story, does seem a little petty what you did to venom when his flash said what we all thought anyway, however, if this is the last good thing you submit, i will be sad.......