bandwagon hopping
sounds wonderful...ill catch up in a few
bandwagon hopping
sounds wonderful...ill catch up in a few
i liked it
i really liked it, very much so, but i thought youd finish the last segment first at least....
did you say finish? look at the title!
you know what...
that was great...i liked it better than those damn commercials, but thats just cause its newgrounds....man i feel like making one now too....but i dont have the resources....great stuff though
well, ill try and be constructive
the whole thing was pretty good in the art...0 shading though, no sense of atmosphere in the lighting department
it lacked an entire feel of art, it felt like pixels because everything was vector except for the animations, and since all you did was tween them, it made the vector lifelessness....
almost entirely 2D, i felt there was no third dimension.....
also the story wasnt really that great...you had like no suspense..she gets captured for one day....doesnt get harmed at all, just captured...and escapes when a guy can just enter the top secret base, and gave her the key to a giant stash of weapons...in her cell....
and the lack of voice acting also made it much less involving.....
creepy....
i liked how snape was an emo, that was good, very funny
Well, he DOES look like one doesn't he?
It suits him
After he left the scene he cut himself.
it was great, yes..
but not your best...artistically, i felt it was different... a lil better, but i still liked little foot better.
this had a hell of a lot of build up....everyone waiting for this great thing, but it just felt sorta...empty, dunno how to say it.... the speed is bitey's thing, and i figured "oh $#!! !! bitey battles the alpha bigfoot" but, it turned out no, not so much
the art, great
the music, synced and great
the story is the only thing that needs improvement. it was hard to describe, so dont take my review seriously...cause i dont think i made any points....
Great though...definately worth mine and anyone elses time
I take your review seriously all the same. Thanks for the comments and I'm taking notes reading these pages :)
unoriginal
its one thing to have a flash inspire you, but its another thing to take the same exact idea, and just redo it with different characters. if this was original, it would have been pretty funny, but no, its not...
it didnt show anything
you pretty much said "make a stick, flesh it and add color" thats not showing technique, a process, pretty much anything that would be very helpful. or at least you shouldnt have called it advanced
not bad for a first
actually, not bad for any flash, you need to work on your actual drawings, and you need to keep the lines thickness consistent. when the stuff actually started taking on a form was when it was obvious that it was noob, but thw line was good
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